Music Video: Post-Production: 1.45 Rough Cut

This the cut we are forwarding to classmates for some initial feedback.
In brief;
The class were impressed over the quality with an emphasis on the editing style. Since its been on youtube many people have been commenting on how professional it looks but few people have offered constructive criticism's.
Some of the criticism's our group have agreed on is the consistency of the lighting, we think that we can make it look more professional by having all the clips with the same brightness and contrast. The visual effects in the film worked well with positive feedback about them, however I feel that it needs to be toned down slightly to make it more effective.

Filming is postponed for the moment after we discovered that Chloe took a random trip to new york and is not available for the shoot.
We could possibly re-write the narrative to not include her but given the small amount of footage we have left to shoot anyway we've decided to make  edits, one with the clips so far and another once Chloe returns and we can film. This will ensure we meet the deadline in case of any other unforeseen circumstances that could effect the shoot. This also gives us the opportunity for a directors cut.